jackietrainwreck

Son, I'm sick ebola, doper than that coca/// And I don't give a f*ck man, I'm duckin all these rollaz// I be cruisin through these night streets with my windows up// Smoke hit my roof and my dude pass the dutch// This what the f*ck i do, come and f*cking stop me dude// You ain't on my level, to reach it is so impossible// My skills are so illogical, illness in the hospitals// Hiroshima everybody, my lyrics is atomic fool// Yeah, I spit history lessons// So you already know when you reach for that weapon// I'll consider that you steppin and cause an insurrection// Goddamn...thats a beautiful lesson// Man here I go, I'm in the zone like a fast ball// My mind is light speed, and I be waltzing past yall// I'm the one you can call, just to take the pain away// And I don't give a f*ck, i drop more than rainy days// And my cypher's so sick, I'm the only one invited// Yo girl seems to like this and she ain't tried to fight it// Where's the blunt? Let me light it till I'm lifted// This the holidays, but you ain't never gifted// And I don't give a f*ck what you consider// Cuz you stuck without a paddle in this f*ckin river// Goddamn I got the chills, boy I'm so cold// I flow like hemophilliac with the bloody nose// Damn understand it, I am manic and I'm famished// And I could give a f*ck if you think that I'm a savage// Well I think you a maggot and you don't even know it// But you would never know it as long as you up on that ho shit// My potions are potent, my flow is like the dopest// I'm higher than a mountain top and deeper than an ocean// Goddamn mothaf*ck, what the f*ck we gonna do?// When everytime you talk, you soundin like a fool// You looking like a tool, that's why you get used// Bitch here's a tissue, here's a cup of Yoohoo!// One thought for my brain, one love for the homies// Why the f*ck life always gotta be so f*ckin lonely/?/ I reach out to the homies, but I'm never reachin far enough// I just wanna eat steak and fly home to foreign stuff// f*ck a star and the fame, I need the cars and the chains// All about the dough, bitch I'm hardly ashamed// I'll spit the worst verbs, and blurt curses// Bitch got the curves, I ain't talkin about cursive// My prayers are so fervent, but God don't got His hearing aid// Awake like an owl, because I think I f*cking fear the day// Yeah...you ain't on my level// Sippin on that Ketel till my hands are on that metal// I'll leave your city leveled, hurricane Cho on the way// I love kickin knowledge while ya girl give me brain// Can I get ya girl's name? maybe we can kick it// Why you f*ckin trippin when she gave me the digits?// You got your life, go live it// Before you f*ck around and get your helmet splitted...I mean split//

yo that shit was pretty dope. I loved the flow on this joint. Shit was pretty deep too bro. Keep it up

Pretty good stuff, but I think your flow came off a little choppy...maybe make your lines a tad bit longer?