@geographyhorse Sorry, I suddenly realized I had not come back to comment.
No, not the trash bin. I think the music is great. The backing vocals are texturally interesting. The main vocals are strong, but I can't put my finger on why they are not working for me. It's almost like they exist in a different pitch space. What if, as an experiment, you raised most of them (except the tonic, of course) a half step. Also, maybe play around with making them more vulnerable, less strident. I am in awe of your eclecticism, your ability to try anything.