Hey Michael, glad you found us.
A couple of things if you could a) see my sig below about profile, about me, map etc - when you have time. b - it's the custom here before you post to critique (hopefully) 3 other members songs before posting your lyrics. That way, we all learn new things, make friends and become active in the community.
I know your new here and to all of this so take a little time cruising the boards, topics and posts. Dive into them first to get a hang of critiquing to see what others say so you can understand the why. You'll also pick up some good tips, help and advice along the way
Don't worry, this is just a friendly nudge - we're not the SS of old, we're SongStuff and we're all here to have fun, a laugh and talk seriously about all things musicwise.