[Sliver of A Moon]

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[Getting Lyric Rhythm And Stress Right.]

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[Getting Lyric Rhythm And Stress Right.]

gary , you should do some vids (lol in your spare time) over the years youve learned some twists that would help many lyricists, me included ! but to really get what you are saying , a vid would really help , like in the stress syllable count , you have mentioned that to me before , and i now see that mistake often in reading , but as you said , you would look funny doing it (cause you was in public) bobbing your head up and down . you have some great things to offer others here , even seasoned writers , just a thought and a thank you !!

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