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#28 Club 27


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This challenge turned out to be thougher than I expected.
 
 
Verse:
I took champagne and 50 pills
But dead won't take me in his arms so easily
I guess he likes to play games
He decides who succeed and who fails
 
Verse:
If they would ask I will deny
It wasn't suicide I'm just bored of this life
So I took another shot of joy
I'm not a star but a lost boy
 
Chorus:
Welcome to club 27
Where you live hard and die young
All about music, drugs, alcohol
When the time was there
I knew what had to be done
Sealed my destiny with a gun
 
Verse:
The breath of madness in my neck
Pullling the trigger without a single blink
Without any single regret
I blew a hole trough my head
 
Chorus:
Welcome to club 27
Where you live hard and die young
All about music, drugs, alcohol
When the time was there
I knew what had to be done
Sealed my destiny with a gun
 
Chorus:
Welcome to club 27
Where you live hard and die young
All about music, drugs, alcohol
When the time was there
I knew what had to be done
Sealed my destiny with a gun
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Vagda, so nice to see you back in the challenges! This is a really good lyric and I definitely can hear music to it. Welcome to Club 27. I like you story telling and your images. I also think it's Kurt Cobain. You really made me feel the pain this person was going through !

 

 

Goldy :jumping38:  :jumping38:

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Hi James & Goldy,

 

Thanks for the read and the comments :)
It is about Kurt Cobain. I had to use wikipeda and google as my inspiration :P
Maybe I need to make it clearer that it is about Kurt Cobain? As I said, I found this thougher than I expected!

And yes I'm back again :) Been following the challenges and entries but there was to much going on in my life to be focused on the challenges.

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This is a cool lyric, it kind of reminded me of hotel California for some reason. You did a good job with it.

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