Untitled Beginning

[m1k3]

I form evil quatrains
torture from the Renaissance age
pressin' hombres
'til thier body is concave
welcome to the mindset of hip hop's enclave
beyond brave
hand feeding tigers chopped steak
in the Sunderbans
a place where humans are entrees
" donde ? "
a thousand miles east of Bombay
I leave cities destroyed like Pompeii
mouth is Mount Vesuvius
even when I'm blasè

 

Any feedback is welcome.

[iwishtorightasong]

this is nice good job. i new...