hello

[THEHOUND]

hi,my name is jesse..

first day here.just looking to share some of my work

looking forward to feedback

thanks

[john]

Hi and welcome Jesse Now I know what name to use in the chat room! lol

[TCgypsy]

Welcome to songstuff! I will keep an ear out for your tunes in the song section.

Peace,

TC

[THEHOUND]

kk.lookin..

[Janeva]

Hi

Welcome to Songstuff.

I hope you enjoy being here 

Jan

[AD4M5KI]

Just joined guys want to learn about writing songs any advice welcome I've only done 1 so far have a new one but struggling on chorus any help please 

 

[AD4M5KI]

27 minutes ago, AD4M5KI said:

Just joined guys want to learn about writing songs any advice welcome I've only done 1 so far have a new one but struggling on chorus any help please 

 

This is the song I wrote for my daughter I'm working away and she's in Colombia so the song name is Mentiroso 

lier in Spanish 

 
It's getting harder to call you each day 
The pain I hear in things you say 
wish I was there I wanna be with you
I'm coming promise soon as I'm through 

Believe me now 
Some way some how 

You look to the sun in your sky 
The stars are in mine 
time zones 
mentiroso 
I'm sorry that your all alone 
believe me now 
I'm no MENTIROSO  
I won't let you go 
Never let you go 
No no 

I try to call,,, you just put the phone down 
trying explain best I no how                                              But you don't believe what I'm trying to say
I say the same thing every day 

 
Believe me now 
Some way some how 

You look to the sun in your sky 
The stars are in mine 
time zones 
Mentiroso 
I'm sorry that your all alone 
Believe me now 
I'm no mentiroso
I won't let you go 
Never let you go 
No no 

No it's been long and your hurting inside 
But I'm breaking too but my feelings hide
won't be much longer be back with you
Can forget the past and start a new 

Believe me now 
Some way some how

We look to the sun in our sky
Shines so bright 
Time zones 
Mentiroso 
Now we are all alone 
You believe me now 
I'm no mentiroso 
I wont let you go 
Never let you go 
No no