MY SUPERHERO

[RikGrimesIsDead]

MY SUPERHERO

 

(CHORUS)

 

As you swoop down in your cape and long blonde hair

Make being a superhero look easy with your style and your flair

And always know the danger,never makes a sound

But has enough power to put you 6ft in the ground

MY SUPERHERO (x3)

 

(v1)

 

In your spare time baby you are a thing of beauty

ready to be the saviour

To all the men,women and babies

And you really dont see

All the good things you do

But my idol thats just you

No regard for your own safety

As long as we are rescued safely

MY SUPERHERO (x2)

 

 

(CHORUS)

 

As you swoop down in your cape and long blonde hair

Make being a superhero look easy with your style and your flair

And always know the danger,never makes a sound

But has enough power to put you 6ft in the ground

MY SUPERHERO (x3)

 

(v2)

 

Baby my heart almost skipped a beat

When you revealed your surprise

Fighting bad guys through you're disguise

But it made me love you more and more

And it’s what we are all fighting for

You risk your life every day

So to you i wanna say….you’re MY SUPERHERO (x3)

 

 

(CHORUS)

 

As you swoop down in your cape and long blonde hair

Make being a superhero look easy with your style and your flair

And always know the danger,never makes a sound

But has enough power to put you 6ft in the ground

MY SUPERHERO (x3)

 

(V3)

 

 

 

And as you swoop down…….MY SUPERHERO

I feel safe…..MY SUPERHERO

Saves the day ……MY SUPERHERO

Here to stay……MY SUPERHERO

 

 

 

My superhero (x2)

Saved my life

My superhero (x2)

saved my life

MY SUPER——HERO

written by David Smith 

copyright (r) 2017

[Foxfire]

Hi, just want to start by saying that I really like the sentiment of your lyrics. The chorus on the whole is good but the first line doesn't quite make sense - try changing "swoop down in" to swoop down with maybe, because otherwise it sounds like they're wearing long blonde hair rather than having long blonde hair. As for the verse, the rhyme scheme gets a little confused for me. For the first verse you're using half rhyme, but the second uses perfect rhyme which is just a bit inconsistent. Overall though I really like the extended metaphor and I think you've got a good idea here.