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So I'm 19, and I have been writing lyrics for years. They've always been song lyrics, not rap lyrics. So here is my first attempt at rap lyrics. I kind of just slammed this down on paper, so it is really raw. Help would be really appreciated! 


I know I shouldn’t miss you

But I f*cking do

You were everything to me

Going on year three

You almost took what I couldn't get back

Yet you had a girl waiting for you on deck

While I was in the box ready to bat

Bat for us, fight for us

I was ready to give us my all

But all you did was let me fall

You didn’t try to catch me 

You sat there and practically laughed at me

Now I am here writing this

And you're out there f*cking her in the mist

Of my own tears over you

It shouldn't be true

But thats just how f*cked up this was

How f*cked up you are because

You had her lined up for after

For after you f*cked me

But no it didn't come to that

Literally I didn't cum for that

I guess I kind of faked it

Outsmarted you with my sexual wit

I guess there’s somethings you can’t screw

I can’t believe I thought I loved you

You left me like I meant nothing

Guess those three years meant nothing

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