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Doomsday last won the day on July 23 2011

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    Alanis Morissette, John Mayer, Jack Johnson, Kings Of Leon, Green Day, Bob Dylan

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  1. Am I Asking For Too Much?

    Verse 1: I’ll never have you Even though my lust for you will never undo Your face gets me every time Your body warms me up like sunshine But I know I’ll never have you Oh what can I do Chorus: Just one kiss, just one touch Am I asking for too much? I want your sex, I want your sin Give me everything that dwells within I’m losing my mind, won’t you be my crutch Am I asking for too much? Verse 2: Every time you walk on by I lose myself, I get so high I wanna make you mine I’d do anything for you to be mine But you’ll never be ‘Cause you’re not like me Oh you’re not like me Chorus: Just one kiss, just one touch Am I asking for too much? I want your sex, I want your sin Give me everything that dwells within I’m losing my mind, won’t you be my crutch Am I asking for too much? Bridge: I can’t take it anymore You’re the one I’ve been dying for And it’s killing me inside This feeling I just can’t hide Chorus: Just one kiss, just one touch Am I asking for too much? I want your sex, I want your sin Give me everything that dwells within I’m losing my mind, won’t you be my crutch Am I asking for too much?
  2. Careless Mistake

    Verse 1: They say don’t judge a book by its cover But you don’t validate that notion ‘Cause when I saw you I thought this could end in disaster But I still set our hearts in motion And it blew up in my face You were everything I thought you would be A dead-beat loser wanting life for free Chorus You’re my careless mistake I saw danger and I went in You’re my careless mistake And my careless sin Verse 2: I saw you at a store the other day You acted like we never had a falling out You said hello to me, I muttered back ‘Cause I know what you’re all about Golddigger, too lazy to make his own money Wants the easy way out, and suck the life out of me Chorus You’re my careless mistake I saw danger and I went in You’re my careless mistake And my careless sin Bridge: Never again will I hear you say you hate Taylor Swift Never again will I smell alcohol on your breath Never again will I give in to your lies I’d rather hold the hands of death You wanted to be friends with benefits But with you, I can’t swing that way ‘Cause you don’t have the looks for it So keep your hands to yourself anyway Chorus You’re my careless mistake I saw danger and I went in You’re my careless mistake And my careless sin Just when I thought I found a friend It all came to a tragic end
  3. Fly

    Verse 1: When will I fly? Before I die Stuck in a rut Going nowhere Same ol' things driving me insane So many things I must gain When will I fly? Oh, when will I fly? Chorus: My wings are broken My pain is spoken When will I fly? And be awoken Time is fading I’m still waiting For me to shine When will I fly? Oh, when will I fly? Verse 2: When will I see? This ain't good for me Crippled by fear Going nowhere How long will I be this way? I'm frozen everyday When will I see? Oh, when will I see? Chorus: My wings are broken My pain is spoken When will I fly? And be awoken Time is fading I’m still waiting For me to shine When will I fly? Oh, when will fly? Bridge: Fly to the heavens from this burning hell Fly to the heavens from this burning hell Need to take that leap of faith And fly to the heavens from this burning hell Chorus: My wings are broken My pain is spoken When will I fly? And be awoken Time is fading I’m still waiting For me to shine When will I fly? Oh, when will I fly?
  4. Trapped

    Verse 1: I’m a prisoner in my own life It’s never ending There’s no way out Nothing fixes, everything stays broken Like groundhog day, the troubles repeat Chorus: Is it gonna be like this forever Am I always gonna wake up to this same tragedy? Is it gonna stay like this forever? Am I ever gonna break free? I’m trapped, I’m trapped in my own life I’m trapped, I’m trapped in my own life Verse 2: I cannot do anything at all I’m damned if I do Damned if I don’t I cannot be what I wanna be They’ll curse my soul, so I can’t be whole Chorus: Is it gonna be like this forever? Am I always gonna wake up to this tragedy? Is it gonna stay like this forever? Am I ever gonna break free? I’m trapped, I’m trapped in my own life I’m trapped, I’m trapped in my own life Bridge: Everything I touch turns to dust Doors won’t open for me That’s why I keep falling to the same ashes And darkness is all I see Verse 3: Live by their words or it’s war I wonder who the hell I’m living for I’m just a pawn following orders It can’t be me I’m living for No, it can’t be me I’m living for Chorus: Is it gonna be like this forever? Am I always gonna wake up to this tragedy? Is it gonna stay like this forever? Am I ever gonna break free? I’m trapped, I’m trapped in my own life I’m trapped, I’m trapped in my own life
  5. Sweet, Sweet Child

    Verse 1: Don’t be yourself or they’ll kill you That’s what I got from you Take the abuse, they don’t mean no harm That’s what you told me to do Well did you know it was killing me inside I became fragile and afraid Will I ever come out of this, I need grace To undo this curse you’ve made And you call yourself a mother And you call yourself a father Chorus: Sweet, sweet child I’ll love you more than life itself And you don’t have to hide Or try to be someone else Cuz I’ll love you unconditionally Like my mother and father never did to me Sweet, sweet child Be whatever you want to be I’ll love you unconditionally Verse 2: Just be like everybody else That’s what I heard from you Be normal, be like other guys That’s what you told me to do I never felt you loved me for being me So I became sad and alone Cuz I didn’t fit in on the outside And I didn’t fit in in my own home Chorus: Sweet, sweet child I’ll love you more than life itself And you don’t have to hide Or try to be someone else Cuz I’ll love you unconditionally Like my mother and father never did to me Sweet, sweet child Be whatever you want to be I’ll love you unconditionally Bridge: When I have a child of my own I’ll never tell him what you told me I’ll cherish his individual mind His heart will always be free Not locked and concealed Because of fear of being different Mother and father you never loved me Chorus: Sweet, sweet child I’ll love you more than life itself And you don’t have to hide Or try to be someone else Cuz I’ll love you unconditionally Like my mother and father never did to me Sweet, sweet child Be whatever you want to be I’ll love you unconditionally
  6. Living A Lie

    Verse 1: The disguise you wear Does it rule your world for you? If it gives up on you And becomes see through What would you do? Oh, what would you do? You’re gonna reach a bitter end With your so called friend ‘Cause he doesn’t know The truth that’s meant to show You’re an imposter You’re an imposter Chorus: ‘Cause you’re living a lie It’s keeping you high It makes your spirit fly And It’s getting you by When you’re living a lie You have no alibi I don’t even know why You’re living a lie You’re living a lie You’re living a lie Verse 2: You’re talking to him Feeding him what he wants And he believes you are real But the truth you conceal You’re a criminal You’re a criminal Chorus: ‘Cause you’re living a lie It’s keeping you high It makes your spirit fly And It’s getting you by When you’re living a lie You have no alibi I don’t even know why You’re living a lie You’re living a lie You’re living a lie Bridge: Tell him your secret, why don’t you Are you afraid of what the outcome might be? The fear that cripples you inside Is the wind that’ll set you free Chorus: You’re living a lie It’s keeping you high It makes your spirit fly And It’s getting you by When you’re living a lie You have no alibi I don’t even know why You’re living a lie You’re living a lie You’re living a lie
  7. Wicked Heart

    Clear the air means leaving not apologizing.
  8. Wicked Heart

    Verse 1: Never knew somebody can be so mean You scorn me with no love in between Take my feelings and turn it black You say things you never take back Chorus: Your heart is cold as stone That’s why I’m leaving you on your own You won’t break me, no you won’t shake me We’re gonna stay two worlds apart Cuz you’re nothing but a wicked heart Yeah, you’re nothing but a wicked heart Verse 2: After the fight you leave the wound open You clear the air and I stay broken You act like you did nothing wrong While I hurt for so, so long Chorus: Your heart is cold as stone That’s why I’m leaving you on your own You won’t break me, no you won’t shake me We’re gonna stay two worlds apart Cuz you’re nothing but a wicked heart Yeah, you’re nothing but a wicked heart Bridge: From now on we’re blood brothers only by name We went down and you’re the one to blame I know I’m adding fire to the flame But it hurts me not and I feel no shame Chorus: Your heart is cold as stone That’s why I’m leaving you on your own You won’t break me, no you won’t shake me We’re gonna stay two worlds apart Cuz you’re nothing but a wicked heart Yeah, you’re nothing but a wicked heart
  9. War Zone

    Verse 1: It’s a constant battle Words like bullets flying everywhere It’s a constant struggle Enduring when the pain is too much to bear People don’t know how to love Trying to keep from losing my mind My walls are breaking Soon I’ll be standing at the front line And I don’t know what to do when I’m there So I talked to my shrink and asked him this questionnaire Chorus: How do you keep sane in a war zone? How do you think you can make it on your own? How do you keep sane in a war zone? How do you think you can make it on your own? Verse 2: I’m not gonna pretend Like there’s peace when there’s not Denial will not save me But drain all the energy I’ve got I keep strong but the battle is stronger I don’t know if I can take it much longer Soon I’ll be standing at the front line And I don’t know what to do when I’m there So I talked to my shrink and asked him this questionaire Chorus: How do you keep sane in a war zone? How do you think you can make it on your own? How do you keep sane in a war zone? How do you think you can make it on your own? Bridge: How do you drown the noise? How do you run for cover? How do you find safety? How do you smile again? How do you ease the pain? How do you keep sane? Oh, how do you keep sane? Chorus: How do you keep sane in a war zone? How do you think you can make it on your own? How do you keep sane in a war zone? How do you think you can make it on your own?
  10. What Am I Now To You?

    I couldn't think of another word that best describes a feeling that it's not even a thought being so young. And the strange part means that being so young it should feel strange instead of good but it felt good. And that's strange because we were so young.
  11. What Am I Now To You?

    Eww, no. I'm just saying we didn't need approval from each other's parents.
  12. What Am I Now To You?

    A song about my first sexual experience. Verse 1: We were very young children Lust was an intangible feeling Yet we wanted each other so bad No approval from mom and dad We were experimenting Sex was a science we wanted to figure out Two brave little souls, no self-doubt Chorus: How are you today? Will you recognize me if I came your way Haven’t seen you in a very long time But you’re always on my mind Am I always on your mind too? What am I now to you? Verse 2: It felt so damn good As strange as that may seem Innocence was not a deflection We lost our discretion No one needed to find out Have you broken the silence of this innuendo? When did you decide to let it go? Chorus: How are you today? Will you recognize me if I came your way Haven’t seen you in a very long time But you’re always on my mind Am I always on your mind too? What am I now to you? Bridge: Oooh, ooh, are you lonely? Oooh, ooh, do you still want me? Let’s meet up again soon I promise I’ll be the comfort in your gloom Chorus: How are you today? Will you recognize me if I came your way Haven’t seen you in a very long time But you’re always on my mind Am I always on your mind too? What am I now to you? ​
  13. My Best

    Verse 1: It wasn’t the ending that I hoped for But I tried my best Rocks and spikes through the pathway door Still I tried my best Even though I’m here crying on my pillow And the pain inside me burns nice and slow At least I know That I tried my best Chorus: Life ain’t easy You gotta know how to work yourself around If it comes down crashing Just know that you are not hell bound Yes, I’m quite aware that life’s a test And I know that I’ll always do my best Verse 2: I gave it everything I ever could And that was my best Guess it wasn’t enough, wasn’t that good Still I did my best Seems like the heavens are not on my side And this truth I just can't confide Still I have cried That I did my best Chorus: Life ain’t easy You gotta know how to work yourself around If it comes down crashing Just know that you are not hell bound Yes, I’m quite aware that life’s a test And I know that I’ll always do my best Bridge: Everything happens for a reason Depends on the time and the season Maybe this is just not for me Whatever will be will be Chorus: Life ain't easy You gotta know how to work yourself around If it comes down crashing Just know that you are not hell bound Yes, I’m quite aware that life’s a test And I know that I’ll always do my best
  14. It's Not Me, It's You

    Verse 1: You didn’t want me You just used me because you were lonely I should’ve seen it coming But your demeanor made everything look so pretty Were you yourself when we were driving through the night Or were you just a shadow of the moonlight You’re not the first one to run from me So then at first I thought it was me But then I realized Chorus: It’s not me, it’s you I did everything a good guy would do I don’t need to feel blue Even after all the things you put me through Though this is nothing new It’s not me, it’s you Verse 2: I’m so sorry for you You don’t realize what a catch I am You missed out on something good But everyone has had a losing hand I’m gonna make something of myself one day And you’d wish I wasn’t the one that got away You’re not the first one to run from me But I’m not gonna feel sorry for myself Cuz then I realized Chorus: It’s not me, it’s you I did everything a good guy would do I don’t need to feel blue Even after all the things you put me through Though this is nothing new It’s not me, it’s you Bridge: All the conversations we had Thought that’s how friendship starts You can have the other one You’re both good at breaking hearts Chorus: It’s not me, it’s you I did everything a good guy would do I don’t need to feel blue Even after all the things you put me through Though this is nothing new It’s not me, it’s you
  15. Over It

    I don't think I have to be specific. It's a general song. We've all gone through times where we're faced with same problems over and over again, we're just over it and trying to move on.
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