Rap Crit (I Against All)

[Scr1pter]

I have been working on a progression for a rap song. Here it is so far. All crits are welcome. Please be constructive in your crits I want to get better.
I Against All
 

 

[john]

Have you removed the track Scr1pter? I was just going to have a listen.

[Scr1pter]

On 12/30/2019 at 2:37 PM, john said:

Have you removed the track Scr1pter? I was just going to have a listen.

Sorry about that I am doing a progression on this. So I removed the older tracks.

 

[BlueNote]

Hello! 
It’s a little hard give a critique because I can’t hear the words clearly. I think the first way to improve is finding a way to make cleaner recordings. 
 

I can get a sense of the flow though, so I’d say to work on matching your voice to the beat. Treat it like another instrument and get it to match. I’m new to producing so I don’t know the vocab, but I hope you get what I’m saying. 
 

Keep it going!

[Scr1pter]

On 1/9/2020 at 11:12 PM, BlueNote said:

Hello! 
It’s a little hard give a critique because I can’t hear the words clearly. I think the first way to improve is finding a way to make cleaner recordings. 
 

I can get a sense of the flow though, so I’d say to work on matching your voice to the beat. Treat it like another instrument and get it to match. I’m new to producing so I don’t know the vocab, but I hope you get what I’m saying. 
 

Keep it going!

Hello BlueNote, I appreciate the crit and I agree its not my best recording. I am still working on learning Pro Tools properly. I am new to recording with an actual mic too. I think I had my interface volume set to high.  Thanks sister!

[ALOPRODUCTIONZ]

cant hear the words very well and you sound monotone in some parts showing knowing emphasis on the words. your flowing over  the beat well tho