Song lyrics draft

[Petertang]

Never There

When those tears fell down,
When I hear and see
When you started to drown
I didnt ignore your pleas
I give my all, 
When you fall.

But now that I need you 
You're never there
Now that I'm feeling blue
Say you've no time to spare
Now I'm just noise to brush aside
not the one who helped when you cried.

Did it really mean nothing,
Or do you just not remember?
Now that the waves are coming,
Would you regret your slumber?
Maybe you think annoying,
But inside I'm screaming..

But now that I need you 
You're never there
Now that I'm feeling blue
Say you've no time to spare
Now I'm just noise to brush aside
not the one who helped when you cried.

Was it worth it to help a helpless you when you won't do the same,
Was it worth it to show I'm not okay if you'll brush it away
Was it to worth to throw my heart to you who doesn't care
You call me needy and always after pity,
But would you regret me going quickly?

But now that I need you 
You're never there
Now that I'm feeling blue
Say you've no time to spare
Now I'm just noise to brush aside
not the one who helped when you cried.

But I'll still be there

 

[MikeRobinson]

I like it.

 

Now, cut out two-thirds of it.

 

"Kill your darlings ..."

[IsaiahCharles]

awesome...

I like...

i am sharing with you  my favorite lyric :

 

Well, the man there said he needed three Reminded all he had given me Then the bastard left with everything what's mine 'Cept the shirt I wore, shoes on my feet They tread through night, a timely beat Take in the sharp air, breathe it deep It's fine

 

I said it's fine

 

They take interest now on what I owe When ten percent tithe saves a soul But better they know, with their blinking sign They'll have it all, and what you don't Will force you out and get foreclosed Raised the tent for their nose long ago It's fine

 

I said it's fine

 

She took half of things I didn't own And left me so deep in a hole The cold defies the laws of space and time And down there did the Devil meet A man just thrilled to get some sleep Laughed and said "You think this is deep? It's fine"

 

I said it's fine