New Music Friday #20

[john]

Hi Gang

 

It’s time for New Music Friday!

 

Post up your current music projects, anything from just a melody through to a full production. As experimental as you want.

 

I will post up yet another of the 1 take songs I recorded on my phone a little later. 

 

Cheers

John

[john]

Hey gang,

 

Provisional title, incomplete (verse, lift, chorus), recorded on my phone today
 

Thorn In My Side

 

 

Verse

 

Never thought that I'd be 

A thorn in your side

From hero to zero in the blink of an eye, 

I won't lie. I'm surprised.

 

 

Pre-Chorus 1

 

Each time that I hear, I'm outliving my fears

Deep inside, I feel pride

And I want you to know, no matter how it goes

What the hell, I wish you well

 

 

Chorus

 

Raise me up

Put me down

You keep me guessing the game

But my feet are firm on the ground

Turning around

I know my own mind

I’m tired of you messing

 

[Steve Mueske]

Wow, I really like this! Keep 'em coming.

[john]

Thanks Steve! I like where this is going myself.

 

I’ve more to post and several to write words for, including this!

[Just1L]

I found it! Easily. This sounds good to me John. Only thing I can offer is a little smoothing out of some of the spots in phrasing and you'll be good to go!

Randy

[john]

2 hours ago, Just1L said:

I found it! Easily. This sounds good to me John. Only thing I can offer is a little smoothing out of some of the spots in phrasing and you'll be good to go!

Randy

 

Thanks Randy. Still writing, so it's still a long way from performance ready!