Nightwolf

this is cool John, I'll see what I can come up with

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Big fan of the chorus, very evocative. I can see a guy standing at a full length mirror with his head down with something broken in his hands. Would it make sense to make it past tense?

Waitin' for the phone to ring Every Day I die just a little Just waitin' for the phone to ring Waitin' on a word from my baby And I still haven't heard a thing I think my baby lost my number Or she would have called by now I think my baby lost my number But I can't see how For five long years now people It was her number too If I thought she wasn't gonna call I don't know what I'd do I get so lonely Yeah, yes it's true Waitin' for a call from you Every Day I die just a little Just waitin' for the phone to ring Waitin' for word from my baby And I still haven't heard a thing Not a thing

I used to love her, but i had to kill her<< best break up song of all time

If you have a decent PC get some DAW software that you can use to run loops. Asking which one would open a huge kettle here. They are an easy way to get started and there are plenty of free ones available if you hunt around. Search our forums here, there are countless discussions (arguments) about what software to use Research DAW (digital Audio Workstation) Research Free Drum loops (you can get huge sets of quality loops that work well together for not much money)

Some of mine nag me a bit

It's a personal thing. If you feel mired then clean house. For me I would need one of them the second I burned them. I still have the first Words I ever wrote and every once in a while the come in handy.

^^What he said^^ A low pass filter or De-esser may be able to fix it if it isn't too bad. Better to find the problem of course. Look for external causes. Is the PC far enough from the mic? is your AC on? Ceiling fan, Fluorescent lights?

Thanks, Rudi Thanks MP

Is Poetry invited?

Exciting stuff John

Interesting. Try it now

Here's a song I wrote dedicated to the folks in the armed services, police, fire. All the folks that work hard to keep us safe everyday. Debt