I always put my bridge at the end of my lyric
I don't know why... but I always end with it.
Your bridge is the conclusion that you never be what she wants you to be...
And it ends with your title. So if that's the last line of your lyric you could keep the title 'model husband' in my opninion.
I would do verse, verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge.
I'm really not good in the technical stuff but if I listen to my feeling it would be that way.
Maybe Donna has another vision about it.
I liked your first version of verse 3 better than the new one, there's a lot more of emotion into it than now.
Maybe...
She carved me out of need, fantasy and greed
She used promises and bribes, inducements as she scribed…
Her signature and cross, weeping and embossed
And never looked at me again
That’s the way it was, and will always be
How I miss the girl I love (I wed)
Just a suggestion. It's your choice at the end.