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Joyous Brown Deer Poetic Lyricism Open To Critique

By ALOPRODUCTIONZ
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harmoniously dancing
 
 together so free
 
two sweet blue butterflys 
 
graciously greet
 
her 
 
reflective gaze is, shimmering eyes
 
her tounge tastes the river
 
 as ripples the sky
 
 
a warm soft wind combs gently through her fur 
 
her dear heart is nourished as now so is she 
 
oh joyous soft brown deer, hop back to the trees
 
full of  gold, red and vibrant green coloured leaves
 
underneath birds with wings wide spread gliding east
 
 
 
picture you and me
 
us together 
 
floating so harmoniously
 
like leaves falling slow from a motionless tree
 
carried around the winds circling a spiralling breeze

 

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