Lyrics Writing Challenge #18 - Go To Your Happy Place

[scotsman89]

Glamm

right up until the dress  line it was written as a male ( Me )  but  put on a my dress felt like a  natural  line. girl taking a long time getting ready . me about fifteen minutes as long as I am already shaved on the face obviously  LOL

 

john

[Glammerocity]

19 hours ago, scotsman89 said:

Glamm

right up until the dress  line it was written as a male ( Me )  but  put on a my dress felt like a  natural  line. girl taking a long time getting ready . me about fifteen minutes as long as I am already shaved on the face obviously  LOL

 

john

 

Dressing up was part of the fun of our gigs, so I get why women spend so much time on it. Maybe we need more lycra in the men's dept.

[Witness]

Hello, I'm new to Songstuff and I'm unsure how this works. Is this an on-going challenge, or will there be a new one soon? Is there a "winner", or is it just a general place to post lyrics and get feedback? Sorry for all the questions. ☺️

[Peggy]

6 hours ago, Witness said:

Hello, I'm new to Songstuff and I'm unsure how this works. Is this an on-going challenge, or will there be a new one soon? Is there a "winner", or is it just a general place to post lyrics and get feedback? Sorry for all the questions. ☺️

There are different on-going challenges. John brings them to the board pretty regularly. We'll probably be  seeing another one soon, but jump in on any of the ones out there.

 

We don't do it like a contest. More of personal challenge to see how you can write to different formats, specs, subjects.  It is challenging..

 

 

[Witness]

20 hours ago, Taking Notes said:

There are different on-going challenges. John brings them to the board pretty regularly. We'll probably be  seeing another one soon, but jump in on any of the ones out there.

 

We don't do it like a contest. More of personal challenge to see how you can write to different formats, specs, subjects.  It is challenging..

 

Sounds fun! I'll see what I can do…

[ALOPRODUCTIONZ]

 chorus

OF COURSE YOU CAN OF COURSE YOU CAN
COURSE YOU CAN of COURSE YOU CAN
OF COURSE YOU CAN YOU CAN you can
of COURSE YOU CAN ofCOURSE YOU CAN
OF COURSE YOU CAN OF COURSE YOU CAN
you can YOU CAN of COURSE YOU CAN

bridge

WHOS GONNA TELL YOU NO
WHOS GONNA TRY STOP YOU U BEST TELL THEM GO
who gonna stop you bro? no1 gonna stop you bro
whos gonna whos gonna win like pro?
you, your positivity is gold
your positivity is gold
your positivitys is known

OF COURSE YOU CAN uno 

chorus
OF COURSE YOU CAN
YOU CAN of COURSE YOU CAN
OF COURSE YOU CAN of COURSE YOU CAN
YOU CAN you can of COURSE YOU CAN

verse1

in this world that were sleeping
its a dream that were greeting
its a dream world to be in
with the birds an the bees an
sunshine an cold breezes
breakthrough achievments
its a miracle theres fresh air that were breathing

chorus2

...
 

[Pahchisme Plaid]

Here is the one I mentioned  that I started on my voice record. Just got the chance to work the rest of it out today.

TICKLE ME ON THE INSIDE 

Lyrics by Kc Chad copyright 2018

 

Your jokes are bad

You make me laugh 

You tickle me on the inside 

 

You say you frown

Just upside down

Incognito’s best disguise 

 

I wouldn’t miss it if I could 

You, you, you..ah, my chest is 

quaking, it’s no-breath taking 

And I’m nearly split in half 

Oh, laughing with you feels so good.

 

I can see trouble

Dotted mind bubble

Mischief brewing in your eyes

 

Wiggle and wobble 

Your eyes are like baubles

Top wound taut for me to bite

 

I wouldn’t miss it if I could 

You, you, you..ah, my chest is 

quaking, it’s no-breath taking 

And I’m nearly split in half 

Oh, laughing with you feels so good.

 

A great punchline 

Delivered on time

golden gears turn your mind 

 

I hold my sides

I all but cry

Laugh so hard my face turns ripe

 

I wouldn’t miss it if I could 

You, you, you..ah, my chest is 

quaking, it’s no-breath taking 

And I’m nearly split in half 

Yeah, laughing with you feels so good.

 

You’re so refreshing.  You keep me guessing.  A friend like you, is such a blessing.  Don’t ever change

 

 

 

 

 

 

[DaveKell]

Here's what I came up with a rewrite of sorts OF some recent lyrics. It's a bouncy song in my head that emphasize strongly the words "YEP i'M ON A ROAD TRIP AND I'M HAVING A BLAST".

I'll call it ROAD TRIP

 

 

When I turn the key in my car

something happens in my soul

I abandon all reason and

lose my self control

With a need for speed

I was born to drive fast

YEP I'M ON A ROAD TRIP

AND I'M HAVING A BLAST!

 

Chorus

Flying down the highway

checking out the sights

Watching in the rear view mirror for

flashing blue lights

Long as my luck holds

it'll be a good day

YEP I'M ON A ROAD TRIP

My favorite getaway

 

I've had my trouble with the law

you know that's a fact

I handle police encounters with

intelligence and tact

I always thought speed limit signs

were merely a suggestion

But the highway patrol keeps

asking me the same question

Mister can you tell me why

you're driving so fast

YEP I'M ON A ROAD TRIP

AND I'M HAVING A BLAST

(Chorus)

 

(Tag after last chorus)

Officer you know I was

born to drive fast

YEP I'M ON A ROAD TRIP

AND I'M HAVING A BLAST

YEP I'M ON A ROAD TRIP

AND I'M HAVING A BLAST