New Music Friday #21

[Steve Mueske]

@geographyhorse Sorry, I suddenly realized I had not come back to comment. 

 

No, not the trash bin. I think the music is great. The backing vocals are texturally interesting. The main vocals are strong, but I can't put my finger on why they are not working for me. It's almost like they exist in a different pitch space. What if, as an experiment, you raised most of them (except the tonic, of course) a half step. Also, maybe play around with making them more vulnerable, less strident. I am in awe of your eclecticism, your ability to try anything.

[Steve Mueske]

I finally posted an update to Sevish's piece. I didn't accomplish anywhere near what I wanted to, but I'm pleased that it's finally starting to take form. There are two problem areas yet, which I hope to address soon before I can start adding things.