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We finished up the demo on this newest song this past Tuesday, but it has been so busy at work that I am just now getting around to posting it. It turned out just how I wanted and I couldn't be happier with it. The song has that great retro sound from the past, but is fresh enough for the current country radio market. At least I hope it does! Thanks everyone for listening, and for your undying support. I hope you enjoy it.
Yep, I misheard it. For the "Right hand" line, makes sense to keep as something authentic your Grandmother would say. You could rework that verse some so it's a better fit to the rhyme scheme of v1 and v2, but also still have the line stand out musically in any number of ways that you are likely very good at
@Day 2 ... Thx for taking a 2d listen. Perhaps the lyrics are not as clear as i had imagined.
By the way I re-sang the tune with the changed lyric per my comments with David above. Also added a bit of "room" to the drums per Shadowfax's comments and changed some levels that were bugging me. Thx again for the input.
@Suzy ... as much as I would like to have harmonies on the chorus, it was difficult enough to sing the melody line to begin with. I know my limitations (and there are many).