Post your FIRST POST here to introduce yourself, and afterwards to welcome new members.
Strictly NO MUSIC LINKS, OR LYRICS. The "Introduce Yourself" board is about YOU. Don't worry... you can let us hear works in progress on the critique boards, and finished work in the Musician's Lounge and the Showcase Board.
Indeed this is a momentous occasion!
For the first time in 20+ years, I possess no means of multitrack recording.
My 10 year old Tascam deck just seized up...completely non-responsive.
Oh well...all good things must pass Wonder if it's too late to contact Santa?
I know I'm a little late in answering your call, so to speak, but I've just come across it, I'm Jon Bek by the way a lyricist from the UK, I know you were pitching in September without much luck I see, but I haven't been around myself for a few months, that's why I haven seen your pitch before now, so, if your all fixed up 'which is more than likely' just ignore this massage, but on the other hand, if your still interested and looking for a lyricist, drop me a line and we can take it from there, my email is - firstname.lastname@example.org
Before I invest substantial time and effort in this one, please tell me if the chorus is here too close to something else by someone else. Thanks. I do appreciate it.
he told me one time
That it’s no use to try, (somehow resenting love)
but a stranger knocked on his door
And the thorns of a rose cut deep
There’s no changing my mind
Suddenly she waved goodbye
Left alone with a kid
3 years old,
a black kiss on the cheek
That won’t happen anymore
I’m a little like you
Lost in a fever dream
Won’t get up from bed
A familiar theme
The cold walls whispers in my ear
As I’m sitting with my trusty 45
Baby don’t fear
We’ll be holding hands soon
The pictures painted in maroon
I’m a little like you
Seeing patterns I’ve never seen
Taking care of people,
She’s now 16
I really appreciate your words. I actually thought myself that line didn't fit. So I'll change it! I'll have to get someone to do it for me. It's definitely angry but I was thinking for a really jazz chromatic hook and then into a trap piano rap sound.
If i manage to get someone to do it I'll definitely post it up here!
Thank you again
Welcome to the forum. You've come to the right place. Just post your lyrics and you'll get your feed back. I only joined a few days ago and got some honest appraisal from some experienced muso's. Be cool. Looking forward to reading some of lyrics.