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About scotsman89

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    England (UK)

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    none just let the word fall from my head
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    like all types of music, but think harry chapin was one of the best lyric writters that ever lived r.i.p harry

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  1. addicted to you

    this has changed so much I know I wrote it but feels like someone else edited it
  2. addicted to you

    Patty thanks when you read it I had cut the second verse as it was not working have found one that i think keeps the addicted to you theme going thanks for read john
  3. standing on the edge of tomorrow

    Tom thanks know you did the re write . still trying to get it right here . john
  4. they will remember.

    Zolo can see it is Rap . , don't feel it rhymes enough kept getting stuck in the words every singe day every single class no peace for her they're on her ass every singe day laugh at her weight never giving her a F%$£ing break pointing fingers poking fun spitting hate make her run don't know if this helps or hinders john
  5. standing on the edge of tomorrow

    Tom changed it shorter verses and re arranged the chorus john
  6. Pick and Lift

    leo flowed well but if there is a story > reason I failed to grasp it . robbing my own house something an addict would do . no explanation as to why john
  7. addicted to you

    Peggy thanks always find it hard to go back so soon and find a new way ( more interesting way to say things ) thanks for input john
  8. hi from scotland

    hi froggy hop right in and enjoy your self . john
  9. Not good enough

    probably don't want to hear this but knew you were trouble > Taylor Swift . has the same sound in my head sorry john
  10. addicted to you

    Tom was expecting someone to say . this has been already done with Robert Palmers addicted to love > but in my head it does not sound the same , others may not agree . thanks for input changed some things john
  11. addicted to you

    Les thanks for read two lines and then all the rest came rushing out . things that need to change being changed jihn
  12. Not good enough

    as Les said reads well flows pretty much all the way through , capital on ALWAYS ? why it makes no sense when reading . if we could hear it . that would be nice . can hear a song with same structure in my head , can't think what one will have to let my mind go for a walk john
  13. addicted to you

    ZY > David thanks for read changed the bridge again thought it would work better the way I've done it now . John
  14. addicted to you

    thanks Peggy never noticed TO was missing it only took a couple of moments TO write changed the bridge John
  15. addicted to you

    J Morrison (c) August 2017 the first couple of lines popped into my head opened my note book and the rest just started filling the page I'm not addicted to pills I'm not addicted to booze but I'm addicted to something that makes me feel good with that very first kiss yes it's all it took from that moment on you had me hooked it's true baby I'm addicted to you to feel your hair to taste your lips the way you use your finger tips the way you breath all the things you do that's why I'm addicted to you if you're not here I'm walking the floor just waiting for you to come in the door there in your arms you make me whole come hold me tight and don't ever let go it's true baby I'm addicted to you to feel your hair to taste your lips the way you use your finger tips the way you breath all the things you do that's why I'm addicted to you if I should discover that you love another don't know how I'll recover just hold me tight say you love me then I'll never be in recovery because baby I'm addicted to you to feel your hair to taste your lips the way you use your finger tips the way you breath all the things you do that's why I'm addicted to you baby I'm addicted to you baby I'm addicted to you to fade
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