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    none just let the word fall from my head
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    like all types of music, but think harry chapin was one of the best lyric writters that ever lived r.i.p harry

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  1. J Morrison (c) June 2017 another piece of nonsense about love breaking down things change trying hard to make things right when everything is wrong it's like listening to the music without hearing the song but words are as important as the melody you can hear it takes more than hops and water to make a glass of beer when somethings changing in your life it feels like your whole world is out of line up becomes down square becomes round tears break loose and start falling down things will never stay the same things change you need to know time is never going to be on you side seconds roll into days weeks flow into years like a tide do not think love is won there is just a temporary truce both to tired of all the fighting that's mostly an excuse when something is changing in your life it feels like your whole world is out of line up becomes down square becomes round tears break loose and start falling down things will never stay the same things change we all have to except that life goes on when things change keep on moving forward all that's behind us still remains tomorrow will be better than the day before they say who wants it to be better we want it to stay the same but things change when something is changing in your life it feels like your whole world is out of line up becomes down square becomes round tears break loose and start falling down things will never stay the same things change
  2. thanks Arty for read and critique . as usual I just write and look after if it feels fine I post . then re think it as people put their critique and y=the way they feel it would improve comments in , so will look at this and hopefully improve it john
  3. J Morrison (c) June 2017 as usual no idea where this came from first couple of lines rolled round my head for a few days think i need to work on the flow will do when i have time some fight in me yet I would wake up in a rundown high rise first thing I saw when I opened my eyes was that old guitar standing by the door t was the key to escape being poor I never knew my dad guess I never will after school jobs helped to pay the bills hardly had time that I could call my own if I did was play guitar and write songs when you're poor there is no hand up ( rich or connected people get help from well other rich and connected people that is the meaning of this line you had to fight for anything you got well I was young and you better bet I still had the fight in me yet I still had the fight in me yet me and that guitar practised all we could if I admit it myself I think we were good after school and work hardly time for fun but it was a race and all I could do is run when you're poor there is no hand up you had to fight for anything you got well I was young and you better bet I still had the fight in me yet I still had the fight in me yet the day arrived when my guitar and me were going to get a shot on talent T.V of course I sang with all my heart and played the best I could shaking like a leaf as comments start everyone was positive I had what it takes as I hugged crying mom I said " I think we're are on our way " when you're poor there is no hand up you have to fight for anything you got a little older but there is some fight left I may be on my way but I haven't got there yet still trying to get where I can get I may be on my way but I haven't got there yet
  4. Rob thought you were still doing numbers counting is that not number related ? Seven Seas john
  5. Joe Cocker > the letter
  6. Wallabie just a question is a vocalist that can write lyrics and a lyric writer that can sing not the same thing ? . do not take offence at this post it is just a question not meant to insult as English is not your first language john
  7. just my opinion john
  8. Will my baby says she loves me then she'll go and leave me she never tries to please me but I'm still in love with her or so why do I still love her Just my opinion
  9. Medicine Head > one and one is one
  10. Jenn read and re read still nothing sinks in as ( and I know rhyme is not the be all of a story ) but I can't get past it , Mr fox took my hand looked me in the eye told me there's no plan he came form the hills somewhere far away lets live tomorrow not today time can always break as love leads you astray never leave your hope in a place to far away keep it close because you'll want it someday Mr fox saw in my face he had lost my trust lies can't keep me safe to many rivers crossed then time starts to fade this song must be sung about a love that's done just my opinion john
  11. Retro agree with above critiques a good write waiting to be a great write in my humble opinion . instead of sissies maybe (it maybe to harsh ) losers and after all these centuries ( instead of 14 ) war has been going on since day one religion also from day one just different Gods ? because life's not for losers but getting up and doers stand tall and lead the way no time for side liners moaners or whiners their not going to save the day just my 2 cents john
  12. heard this on the radio the other day > right back to the sixties even had my hair LOL the lemon pipers > green tambourine
  13. silver machine > Hawkwind
  14. Gary thanks did not even give that a thought as usual your critique helpful > changed end of first v john
  15. Gary thanks for read and advice sound as it always is john