Kel, this is my short critique, of your song, and there some suggestions I made. Only my opinion of course. Keep or sweep. It's a very romantic.
Goldy
Brand New Kind
There's a brand new tingle running down my spine/ nice imagery line
When I walk past your office, next to mine./ another great picture I can see
I watch you through the window darling /do you need darling, sounds trite,
Hear you on the telephone laughing,/follows previous 3 verses nicely
A brand new kind of wanting, is in my heart./ nice completion to first verse.
 
There's a brand new kind of weakness in my knees./ needs a better verb like shaking my knees
When you're in the elevator, close to me/. Nice follow up line
You can't see what I am up to,/ maybe going through
I'm longing to reach out and touch you/ I long to reach out and touch you
A brand new kind of needing, is in my heart / a new kind of feeling beating in my heart
Will you ever notice me, / will you ever glance my way
Always close, but you don't see,
Is there something I can do
I only want to be, with you....
There's a brand new flutter to my heart, Nice last verse for completion of song./ fluttering in my heart/ action
And if you let me we won't be apart./
You'll be happy to be with me
And you'll wonder why you couldn't see
A brand new kind of passion, is in my heart.
My heart.
My heart.
Cheers,
Kel