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Rudi

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  1. Good subject. Difficult to put across. You handled it with aplomb.
  2. you can see the fears, the tears Yes, I am sad enough to put a comma in. Its what I would call Wistful. Its quite pretty too. If it were mine, I would substitute 'twirling' for 'spinning', it sounds more dancelike. I just re-read it. Its growing on me. Lovely.
  3. Yep. What he said. No-one knows your lyrics better than you. Anyway, You could always offer her a choice of 2.
  4. I concur wholeheartedly. I regard McCartney as a pop song master-craftsman. Lennon was, by contrast, an artist
  5. Thats more like it.
  6. Welcome to SS Mat Rudi from Portsmouth
  7. Welcome Tommy, Everybodies inexperienced at something. Hope you stick around.
  8. Rudi

    I exist

    You succeeded I think. Kant would enjoy this I reckon. Its about you, but its about everybody.
  9. Hey, good job Amanda. Those words lend themselves to your style well. It certainly doesnt seem the least bit contrived at all.
  10. Hiya Harv, Nice spread of style interests you have. Good to have you aboard. Welcome from Portsmouth
  11. Welcome Muff, yes let us in on the nature of your project. Rudi Portsmouth UK
  12. Seems like a sophisticated method of whining
  13. Bland stuff Percy. Still going through a problem period? No wonder you are getting no feedback. Theres not much positive anyone could find in here.
  14. We all need a wake up call. Yours is well taken Kate. Your mix of caution & optimism is pitched just about right I think. If read, I imagine it to be intoned without too much expression.
  15. Welcome Matt (is there a pun there somewhere?) Hello from Portsmouth UK Drummers are the most important part of a band, so tell that to your vocalist!
  16. Rudi

    Hello

    Hi, I should have checked here before shouldnt I? Welcome to SS What is your band called?
  17. http://www.myspace.com/rudizenon nothing in there, but I got one.
  18. Rudi

    never give up

    Hi kriss, reads pretty good. Not sure about the last 2 lines, though arguably true, they arnt 'ringing' with truth. Enjoyed it though. Hope to see some more.
  19. Hi Ed Welcome from PORTSMOUTH UK Looking forward to some country tunes Rudi
  20. Rudi

    weak 2

    Touching I thought. I like the 'looking & searching' aspect v much. Nice one John
  21. hello Jennifer, Welcome to SongStuff. Rudi Portsmouth UK
  22. Rudi

    Limerics

    Calling the lady named Donna You presence has been such an honour Your assignments are late Due to your garden's state But you can still turn it in if ya wanna
  23. Welcome from Portsmouth UK Danica. Fancy a race?
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