I'll never forget

[Lisa Gates]

I've only ever posted lyrics here on Songstuff.com, but these came to me and I don't want to expand upon them. So I hope they can be considered something. A poem?

 

You asked to be left on the ocean
i placed a piece of you there
fulfilled all your wishes
with tears in my eyes and wind in my hair
i'll always remember
to never forget
the last time i saw you
and the first time we met.

[Lisa Gates]

Hi ya, I'll try it without the line. thanks for looking at it. :-)

[scotsman89]

Lisa  nice 

wind in my hair ?

with tears in my eyes,  wind in my hair

 

john

[Lisa Gates]

yes John, that is the line to keep now. I love it. you always have the right words and way to say them. thank you!

 

[scotsman89]

On ‎19‎/‎03‎/‎2018 at 7:29 PM, Lisa Gates said:

I've only ever posted lyrics here on Songstuff.com, but these came to me and I don't want to expand upon them. So I hope they can be considered something. A poem?

 

You asked to be left on the ocean
I placed a piece of you there
fulfilling all of your wishes
with tears in my eyes and wind in my hair
I'll remember and never forget                                                just think this fells a better way to say it          
the very last time I saw you
and the first time we ever met.

 

[Lisa Gates]

eh, I kinda like it. I think i should change fulfilling to fulfilled.